Sunday, 12 August 2012

Unaffected!!!


Bathing in the rain,
Glistening in the sun,
Droplets on the leaf,
Unaffected by everything, Unattached!




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Writtten for OSI. Prompt - Bathing.
Sincerely wish to be one. Unattached and Unaffected. Can I or will I ever, is the question?
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10 comments:

  1. joanne12 August 2012 at 21:01

    love the image of the leaf 'bathing in the rain'.....

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  2. Anonymous12 August 2012 at 21:50

    beautiful...!!

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  3. Pranita12 August 2012 at 23:03

    Love the thought behind this poem... being IN but not OF the world!

    Bathing under the twilight

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  4. It's Dee for U13 August 2012 at 09:40

    Thanks Joanne and Sandra.
    Pranita, I loved your comment. - Being IN and not OF the world. It carries so much meaning. Thank you for your comment. :)

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  5. Amrit Sinha13 August 2012 at 15:22

    Lovely imagery !!!

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  6. totomai13 August 2012 at 18:09

    and the bathing of the leaves could only mean one thing, hope! :-)

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  7. It's Dee for U15 August 2012 at 07:04

    Thanks Green Speck and totomai. I am glad you liked it.

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  8. Ruchi Jain15 August 2012 at 20:00

    yoho... superb.. anything strong, but attachment is important..:)

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    1. It's Dee for U16 August 2012 at 21:11

      That is the confusion Ruchi. Is Attachment important or Unattachment. :) thanks for your comments Ruchi. :)

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  9. It's Dee for U16 August 2012 at 21:11

    Thank you Lisa. :)

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