Friday 8 March 2013

Haiku Heights - Breeze


A saddened heavy heart,
was reminded of hope,
when caressed by breeze.

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As they romanced in love,
Wind blew a kiss of breeze,
The leaves blushed and swayed.


This was written for Haiku Heights.

Wish all the women a Happy Women's Day.
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6 comments:

  1. Reshma9 March 2013 at 01:35

    lovely Haiku set Dee, although they are not in the traditional 5-7-5 format... The tenderness of breeze comes through beautifully in both he Haiku :)

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    1. It's Dee for U11 March 2013 at 21:17

      Thanks for your kind words, Reshma. I am glad you liked it.

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  2. Eliz Frank9 March 2013 at 15:53

    This is lovely... quite tender too. :-)
    Eliz

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  3. Sri Valli10 March 2013 at 10:16

    Beautiful words Deepthi :)

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    1. It's Dee for U11 March 2013 at 21:18

      Thanks Sri Valli. Thanks for stopping by and being kind to comment. :)

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